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	<title>Comments on: it is finished &#8212; and now it begins &#8230;</title>
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		<title>By: the year i smelled like milk &#171; seedlings</title>
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		<dc:creator>the year i smelled like milk &#171; seedlings</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jan 2008 05:28:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] post to appear there was first drafted over a year ago and revised since then. Total weight in words: over [...]</description>
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		<title>By: the forester</title>
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		<dc:creator>the forester</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 11 Feb 2007 13:25:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It is typed: 58,237 words, approx. 233 pages.

Now the revision process begins, with a vengeance.  It felt loosely worded so I plan to cut around 10,000 words throughout.

Also, I've left the final section alone, planning to draft that at the end -- it'll weigh in at around 8,000 words.  Plus, in typing I realized that I need to draft a few short pieces to fill in some narrative gaps, which will add about another 4,000 words.

So all told the finished product should weigh in at close to where it is now -- something around 60,000 words, 240 pages.  I can't wait to hear it when it's done.

If you're curious, a long time ago I wrote &lt;a href="http://seedlings.wordpress.com/wordcraft/thetunnel" rel="nofollow"&gt;this piece&lt;/a&gt;, a modified version of which will appear in the book, included in a longer account of my bike trip to an unrestored section of the Great Wall.  (Sorry to Jake, who's already quite familiar with it!)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It is typed: 58,237 words, approx. 233 pages.</p>
<p>Now the revision process begins, with a vengeance.  It felt loosely worded so I plan to cut around 10,000 words throughout.</p>
<p>Also, I&#8217;ve left the final section alone, planning to draft that at the end &#8212; it&#8217;ll weigh in at around 8,000 words.  Plus, in typing I realized that I need to draft a few short pieces to fill in some narrative gaps, which will add about another 4,000 words.</p>
<p>So all told the finished product should weigh in at close to where it is now &#8212; something around 60,000 words, 240 pages.  I can&#8217;t wait to hear it when it&#8217;s done.</p>
<p>If you&#8217;re curious, a long time ago I wrote <a href="http://seedlings.wordpress.com/wordcraft/thetunnel" rel="nofollow">this piece</a>, a modified version of which will appear in the book, included in a longer account of my bike trip to an unrestored section of the Great Wall.  (Sorry to Jake, who&#8217;s already quite familiar with it!)</p>
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		<title>By: Jake</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jake</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Dec 2006 16:37:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mike, 

Congratulations.  Wow... you like revising better than ice cream; I know that THAT is saying something.  Happy editing. 

Peace,

Jake</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mike, </p>
<p>Congratulations.  Wow&#8230; you like revising better than ice cream; I know that THAT is saying something.  Happy editing. </p>
<p>Peace,</p>
<p>Jake</p>
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		<title>By: RubeRad</title>
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		<dc:creator>RubeRad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Nov 2006 16:21:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>BTW, do you have a title yet, or are you going to hold a reader competition?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>BTW, do you have a title yet, or are you going to hold a reader competition?</p>
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		<title>By: RubeRad</title>
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		<dc:creator>RubeRad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Nov 2006 16:20:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hooray!  I've always thought you should write more about China -- I guess you have been!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hooray!  I&#8217;ve always thought you should write more about China &#8212; I guess you have been!</p>
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